Tuesday, April 13, 2004
Oh, yeah, forgot to mention, started kicking the shit out of the new Harvest draft today. Nearly finished the opening sequence, I'm taking no prisoners. I've just removed two characters, because there are way too many, and will be folding two into one for clarity. I'm also waging war on dialogue that neither advances the plot nor does anything cool. Begone, boring lines, or say something exciting. Nice.